Meera worked in a government office but she loved designing cloths and wanted to start her own designing business. She knew that her dream of becoming a designer can never be fulfilled as Aman lost his job few months ago and felt he never understood her.
It was her birthday and as expected Aman forgot to wish her. She expected his call full day but he didn’t call.
When she came back there was a box and a letter on the table. Inside the box was a key and she had tears in her eyes when she read the letter.
Word count-100
This is a piece of fiction written by me for the given prompt. A letter written by a husband for his wife. It was a lovely surprise.
January 8, 2017 at 8:03 am
amazing post deepa!!! nice story 🙂
January 8, 2017 at 11:14 am
Thanks Richa 🙂
January 8, 2017 at 11:52 am
Aww. Beautiful story 🙂
January 8, 2017 at 11:57 am
Thanks Maliny 🙂
January 8, 2017 at 6:47 pm
Superb. Loved it
January 8, 2017 at 7:58 pm
Thanks Manisha 🙂
January 9, 2017 at 5:13 am
Nice one Deepa! Loved your take on it!
January 9, 2017 at 8:12 am
Thanks a lot 🙂
January 9, 2017 at 7:31 am
How understanding they both are… Beautiful story.
January 9, 2017 at 8:13 am
Thanks a lot Rajlakshmi..glad you liked it:)
January 9, 2017 at 6:18 pm
Aww…such a sweet story!
January 9, 2017 at 6:35 pm
Thanks for stopping by Jini 🙂
January 9, 2017 at 10:53 pm
Such a beautiful story .Loved it.I lI’ve happy endings.
January 9, 2017 at 11:28 pm
Thanks Amrita 🙂
January 10, 2017 at 11:39 am
Loved your take on the prompt- very creative!
January 10, 2017 at 12:11 pm
Thanks Shalz..glad you liked it 🙂
January 10, 2017 at 4:55 pm
Sweet story! Loved the take on the prompt!
January 10, 2017 at 8:59 pm
Thanks Subha 🙂
January 10, 2017 at 11:51 pm
Short and sweet! I like love stories and this beautifully penned, Deepa! So good to see this side of your writing. Keep writing more such stories. 🙂
January 11, 2017 at 8:19 am
Thanks Saumy for encouraging words and your wishes. 🙂
January 11, 2017 at 12:21 am
So sweet! Pleasant and unexpected surprises make life beautiful! Sometimes, a small gesture is much more than words.
January 11, 2017 at 8:17 am
Thanks a lot Tarang for stopping by 🙂
January 11, 2017 at 3:28 pm
it is very emotional when you are surprised from your loved ones. nice fiction
January 11, 2017 at 5:43 pm
Thanks Geethica 🙂
January 11, 2017 at 4:12 pm
Lovely story, Deepa. I could feel the warmth of this story !!!
January 11, 2017 at 5:44 pm
Thanks a lot Vasantha..glad you liked it 🙂
January 11, 2017 at 11:44 pm
Very beautiful story Deepa. I loved the way it unfolded!!
January 12, 2017 at 7:58 am
Thanks a lot Esha..glad you liked it 🙂
January 13, 2017 at 5:02 pm
ohh I love these kind of surprises, cheers to Aman. Loved it Deepa. Thank you for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction
January 13, 2017 at 9:02 pm
Thanks a lot Tina..glad you liked it 🙂
January 13, 2017 at 9:22 pm
It just kept getting more and more beautiful in just those 100 words 🙂 All happy news around on b’day and then the best gift. What else would one want. Beautifully penned. Keep writing. Cheers.
January 13, 2017 at 10:17 pm
Thanks a lot..Not really a fiction writer but glad you liked it 🙂